Constructive criticism on my poem?

Hi. Valerie nice to see you back. girl you came back, with a deep pion for poetry. great story telling. Unique and original, love and sadness is in the air, your poem is long, but understandable and vivid. It's romantic, and yet inspirational, i like how you paint the dialogue between the lovers , it sounds like a lover's vows to me, i believe the end was kind of sad. You are a Good writer, thanks for sharing your talent with the Word. Love you dear.